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This is back 8D with new stuff added XD

Edit Sept. 23 2009
me and Lex-Yomira234 decided to  close this and make it private (well this is just for fun anyways) people who wants to join  just comment here. anyone can join ^^

we'll stop taking people in after 2 weeks or so i think

after that we'll be making this either in a chat room or a forum
we'll also start a new story and we will not continue the one we did down there vvvvvv



i wanna meet everyone's o.c. =3

(feel free to ask any questions about this


ok this isn't some journal about me ranting something..
ok here is what you do: you continue the short story I'm going to write here. you can insert your own O.C or other character you like. you can make anything happen. then when i read your continuation I'm going to add it in the journal. is that clear or am I misunderstood? and then we'll see what sorta story  we are going to come up.

short story
It was raining. Trin has no umbrella and she is running on the wet cement. she found a waiting shed to shelter from the rain. before she reaches the waiting shed she slips...

...and crashed on the mischievous vampire known as Raiga. The both of them then crashed to the wet pavement. Raiga fell on his butt and Trin ended up sitting on top of him...
-added by Lex-Yomira234

..."Oh! I'm sorry!" Trin apologized, immediately standing up in haste. "I really am sorry. I didn't see you there through the rain." Trin bowed, inwardly kicking herself for being such a klutz. Raiga shook his head, a smirk played on his lips. "Are you asking for forgiveness?" He said rather slyly. "Huh? No, I--" Trin stuttered but suddenly stopped as his catlike eyes lustfully glared at her. "If you want forgiveness..." He gently dug his hand into the muddy puddle he was sitting on and swiftly splashed a handful of water at her, covering her clothes with the wet, gooey muck. "...allow me to hand you an umbrella." She was startled when he slowly stood up and had the umbrella nearly sheltering her head. "You seem to not have any roofing so...this is my way of apologizing, as well. My fault for having this annoying haven blocking my sight." He slightly waved the umbrella around. "Do you want both of us to be forgiven?" He asked with pure cockiness, seeing if she was brave enough to come under or smart enough to walk away silently. Trin was unsure of whether she should step under his territorial sanctuary, whether to come close to a stranger, whether to close the distance between her and something rather inhuman...or not...
added by LeonsBlackValkyrie94

Finally, she steps under the umbrella. Face to face with the vampire, she found his playful eyes staring into hers.

Silence.

"Can I walk you home?" Raiga finally speaks. "Or do you wish to wait for the rain to stop?" She could hear the smile in his voice but could not see it. Because her eyes were still locked onto his...
added bytomoe-no-shinta

"uh, i'm sorry no" Trin suddenly remembered a certain person and runs away in to the rain...
Raiga was offended by Trin's gesture but he let it go and waited for a bus to come...
added by Kumobit (me) (i forgot!!! Trin has a bf already but if anyone would post disregard this plz. oh yeah for the sake of it trin's bf is Calive from fang KK?)

"You should really know how to keep your distance, Raiga..." Rai said, adjusting his glasses with a sigh. Raiga looked at him and his cheeks puffed out like an irritated child "Well you did say you wanted a decoy. Just to keep her away from that damned monster."

"...'sides, I don't get why we have to do this kind of thing" Raiga said, putting his hands behind his head. Rai sighed "I guess that you're more interested in staying like a slave forever, huh?"

Raiga's face changed "eh...I keep forgetting. We owe 'him'" he sighed.

"Oh and one more thing...I didn't tell you to stop, didn't I?" Rai said. Raiga's eyes widened, he glared at him for a second then he dashed off.

"DAMN IT RAI! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?!" he yelled at him as he ran off to look for Trin
added by Lex-Yomira234

Trin slowed down, tired from the running she did. it is still raining and her clothes are soaked and her cellphone is broken. "how am i gonna get a ride now? the next bus stop is far from here and i can't go..." she was interupted by someone that grabbed her arm, it was raiga. "you are soaked you'll get sick if... you stay like this"  Trin was touched by raiga's  kindness...
added by me Kumobit (i'm not dominating this it just i'm eager to see the next post, so i'm posting my self)
  
"Oh, it's you again. Sorry, but I don't need your help as I've said earlier." Trin said, about to continue her hasty run. But Raiga suddenly prevented her from leaving his side by roughly grabbing her wrist.

"I'm afraid I can't let you do that." He said grimly, looking at her rather jumpily while his eyes quickly scanned the area as if somebody was watching.

"Look, I don't have time! I have to meet up with someone right now." She said, struggling to pull herself away from his death grip. Her hand was beginning to hurt as soon as she tugged even harder.

His eyes grew fierce and he pulled her close, holding her hand up. "Listen to me!" He yelled as if he commanded it. "Please cooperate with me. You're in danger!"

"I'm in danger alright!" She retorted. "Somebody help!"

"Keep it down! I'm serious." Raiga was getting furious by the moment.

~Dammit, she won't listen to me. What a pain.~ Raiga thought.

"Help! Somebody!" She screamed louder, desperate to find a person who could help. She was beginning to wonder why this guy keeps on popping out of nowhere and his talk was practically nonsense to her.

~What danger is there?~ Trin thought. ~I don't have any enemies I know about. But then...what if he's right. The atmosphere doesn't feel right. As if there's someone watching me and burning a hole into my head. If so...how is this boy related to it all? Is he linked to this so-called 'danger' in a way?~

Trin still screamed but suddenly stopped as soon as she heard a mischievous chuckle. Raiga growled, inhaling the familiar sickly sweet sent. They both looked up at one of the rooftops, seeing a classy figure sitting with it's legs crossed. Damp white-blond hair blew against the night wind along with his black coat. Eyes of deep-blue sparkled through the moonlight. The beautiful, gentleman-like figure with snow-white skin laughed out loud. He eyed the girl with lusty hunger, licking his pink lips for the desire of her life source. Then he eyed Raiga the vampire, another of his own kind. He grinned, saluting two fingers to the young vamp below.

"Help you, I will." His musical voice said to the girl.

"Kaelan..." Raiga hissed in loath, seeing that 'monster' has finally arrived.
added byLeonsBlackValkyrie94


Raiga knew very well the strength Kaelan possessed. He knew there was no way he could fight and protect the girl at the same time if Kaelan were to go all out on him. But Rai was close... he will definitely come if something happens...

He never saw him move. One moment he was on the rooftop, the next Kaelan was holding Trin's other hand and kissing it, bowing and introducing himself in a most gentlemanly manner. "A pleasant evening to you, Beautiful Lady, though the weather is a bit bad. But I like the rain myself so I am not really complaining..." He smiled at Trin and when she looked at his eyes she saw the bloodlust there... ^^x
added bytomoe-no-shinta

...Calive sat on the wet bench as he felt each droplet of water that hits his skin, he counts each and every drop like the second that passed by 'where is she, she's not usually late'. he ignored every eye that glance at him twice, because he knows why they are starting at him. it's either because of the color of his hair or the fact that he is so drenched and actually doing nothing about it.

he grabbed his soggy book and threw it on the ground because of frustration, every person who was seemingly spying on him jumped and hurried their steps murmurs comming along with it. he glanced at the nearest passer-by who was nearly hit by his book, he pulled out his innocent face and appologized "I'm sorry sir" the man reluctantly smiled back at him and ran 'ordinary humans...' there was a huge lightning that tore through the sky and after wards a thunder came, some got surprised by it but Calive just hid his head to his jacket's hood....
added by me Kumobit (officially edited from teh comment. the errors i didn't notice last night that i just noticed nao was corrected=__= )

"GET AWAY FROM HER!" Raiga yelled at him as he ran and clenched his fists. He lifted one of his fist and used the friction in his movement to surround his fist with fire. The time he got close, he launched his attack on Kaelan, thrusting his fist of fire on him. Unfortunately, Kaelan parried from his attack by stepping backwards, making him separate from Trin.

At the moment, Raiga stood still on the wet pavement, glaring at him with now-red eyes. His fists was engulfed by flames "Tch! I missed..."

He looked back at Trin who seems to be surprised by his sudden attack "Run...'that person' must be waiting for you." he said, reverting his attention to the other vampire.

"...I'll hold him off..."
added by Lex-Yomira234

trin ran back to the bus stop hoping now that raiga will be safe. why did a simple meeting turned out to...this.
after running further away a few minutes later she saw the bus stop, then the rain and the wind suddenly became stronger her hair became a nuisance to her eyesight. she stopped,trying to clear her hair out of her face. without seeing anything she took a step and ends up bumping to something.

she cleared the hair that blocked her view and looked up. she saw that the person she bumped into was Calive. "trin...why were you late, are you ok? i teleported here just to make sure ," trin looked down and answered "yeah i am,you used your powers?" Calive's eyes became softer, he held Trin's face in both his hands "yeah i did or else i would have been worried to death, and i also spied on you" trin looked at Calive's face.She remembered that rain was Calive's dominion, as long as it is raining Calive can have eyes everywhere. "sorry...". from her, trin could feel that his gaze became distant now its like he is seeing something else.
"that boy raiga, do you want me to help him?" trin looked at his eyes which are now enveloped in a trans.
in a flash Calive was replaced by droplets of water scattering across the air were he used to be. she hugged the empty air as if it was Calive "thank you, you read my mind perfectly"
added by Kumobit

In a flash, Raiga was thrown off to the cement concrete by an incredible force and blood flowed from his mouth as he collided with the wall. He slid slightly however, his legs were still able to support him.

He gained his stance and wiped the blood with the back of his glove. He glared at his current opponent and he spit the excess blood from his mouth as a sign of crudeness and disrespect.

Kaelan clapped his hands in mockery "Bravo, Bloodrave, BRA-VO!" irony was at the tip of his tongue. This play was only adding salt to his opponent's wounds.

This pissed Raiga off, "Tch! Ya think this is enough to bring down a Bloodrave?! YOU THINK THAT I'LL DIE WITHOUT AVENGING YUKA?! YOU'RE DEAD WRONG!" his loud cry, his anger, his sorrow, his mixed emotions.

Everything burned from his eyes and they turned into fire. And there, Raiga Bloodrave stood, as the Wrathful Warrior of the Bloodrave.

Kaelan grinned with a playful glint in his eyes. He chuckled in a gleefully dark manner as he witnessed the true form of the 'Wrathful Twin'.

"The 'Bloodrave' clan...they truly are astonishing, when they show their most ugliest form of all. Looks like playtime will be fun after all..."

He smirked darkly and waited for his opponent's next attack.
added by Lex-Yomira234

"Where is he?"

It has only been twenty minutes since Calive had left, but Trin is getting more worried by the second. The rain had gotten heavier, making her cling tighter to her coat.

"..." Trin stared blankly at the shop near her. Tasty looking delicacies was laid out like a buffet, simply tempting her. ~Me and Calive would have had our date right now if it wasn't for those...men~ she sighed as she thought about what the guy told her awhile ago."Who would want to put me in danger?"

While Trin was thinking things over, a man came up to her. She didn't notice he was there until he lifted her chin making her divert her eyes to his in surprise.

The man smirked at her and said in a sort of drunken manner, "Mmm twent' bucks whaddaya say huh dollface?" He was reaching for her waist as he continued to scruntisize her delicate features.

Trin felt paralyzed, mostly because of fear and surprise. She would have slapped this stranger and ran off, but she had mixed emotions at the moment. "I-I..."

SMACK.

Trin fell backwards on the wet pavement almost hitting her head against the wall. She stared up in bewilderment, the man whom was practically molesting her was know crouching on all fours holding his head.

"Oi! Are you okay there?!" A sixteen year old boy was staring at her, breathing heavily and clutching a baseball bat. Well atleast he seemed to be staring a her, his face was partially covered by his jacket's hood.

Trin can only stare back at her savior as he sighed and stepped over the man's body. "Hey you can't stay out here all night, pretty soon every drunk guy will be trying to hook you" His voice sounds kind, and this made Trin finally get back to her senses.She stood up and quickly ran to the boy's side, avoiding the man's crumpled figure. "Errmm thanks...for saving me"

Trin saw him give a quick smile before it turned to an arrogant smirk. "Yea yea just go home" He started walking away, and Trin watched his back, not knowing what to do. She decided to go the other direction, but started feeling nauseous. Darkness engulfed her.
added by 143Gaara-kun

the boy turned around and saw the girl fainted.

when Trin woke up she was lying on some unfamiliar bed and her clothes are changed into pajamas. in a very simple and unfamiliar room, and the lights are off except the lamp on the side table,she shouted.

the boy heard her and opened the door of the room.
"oh you pervert! what did you do to me?!"Trin shouted.
"i just changed your clothes, do you think i would let you lay on my bed wet like that?!" the boy replied in the same manner.
"but you're a boy..."
"huh--a boy?" he took the hood off his face an revealed that he was in fact a girl. "no, I'm not well i wish i was.."
Trin stared in amazement
added by me~


----ok now you continue
this isn't my original idea i just brought it here from M.B.'s O.C.A.
it'll sure be fun if you participated ^^ plz participate?
uhu~ sorry if i will bother someone, but I'll be notifying this again every time new post adds K? nyan~
man these o.c.'s got wet really fast... must be the rainy days getting to everyone
i hope these character  gets along well
i'm so happy as hell that this thing is growing, who know maybe this will be a collab work. i'm still looking for ppl to post. anyone is fine and if you want to ask us about the characters' personality just ask me
why does Trin always get sandwiched by boys huh? seriously are you all somehow reading fang? nah i dun  think you people do, but what a coincidence!!

character guide
Trin(trinity)and Calive belongs to Kumobit
Rai and Raiga belongs to Lex-Yomira234
kaelan belongs to LeonsBlackValkyrie94

(um people if you have like a chara sheet for yor O.C.'s notify me so i could add it to the link here. *gets hit* why do i care so much about this only a few people ever posted)
heh^^ still happy as hell


edit
you could control anyone's o.c so i make this rule
1)when you comment the part you wanna add, i'll direct it to the O.C.'s owner and let him chack if the character is acting like how he used to, when both agreed and made a final version that the time i'll be adding it to the journal
  • Mood: Optimism
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  • Playing: um... no games interested on playing right nao
  • Drinking: iced tea
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Kumobit Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Student Digital Artist
the boy turned around and saw the girl fainted.

when Trin woke up she was lying on some unfamiliar bed and her clothes are changed into pajamas. in a very simple and unfamiliar room, and the lights are off except the lamp on the side table,she shouted.

the boy heard her and opened the door of the room.
"oh you pervert! what did you do to me?!"Trin shouted.
"i just changed your clothes, do you think i would let you lay on my bed wet like that?!" the boy replied in the same manner.
"but you're a boy..."
"huh--a boy?" he took the hood off his face an revealed that he was in fact a girl. "no, I'm not well i wish i was.."
Trin stared in amazement
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143Gaara-kun Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2009
cooollll!!

Ermmm when you updated this journal, did you uncheck that box that asks you if your watchers will be notified?

Just asking because I didn't receive updates for this journal :D Wooooww the "I'm a girl" part is short but awesome! I'll wait till someone replies till I submit something maybe
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Kumobit Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2009  Student Digital Artist
yeah i did and i plan again when im going to add my part~ but I'm still kinda lazy to....
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143Gaara-kun Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
"Where is he?"

It has only been twenty minutes since Calive had left, but Trin is getting more worried by the second. The rain had gotten heavier, making her cling tighter to her coat.

"..." Trin stared blankly at the shop near her. Tasty looking delicacies was laid out like a buffet, simply tempting her. ~Me and Calive would have had our date right now if it wasn't for those...men~ she sighed as she thought about what the guy told her awhile ago."Who would want to put me in danger?"

While Trin was thinking things over, a man came up to her. She didn't notice he was there until he lifted her chin making her divert her eyes to his in surprise.

The man smirked at her and said in a sort of drunken manner, "Mmm twent' bucks whaddaya say huh dollface?" He was reaching for her waist as he continued to scruntisize her delicate features.

Trin felt paralyzed, mostly because of fear and surprise. She would have slapped this stranger and ran off, but she had mixed emotions at the moment. "I-I..."

SMACK.

Trin fell backwards on the wet pavement almost hitting her head against the wall. She stared up in bewilderment, the man whom was practically molesting her was know crouching on all fours holding his head.

"Oi! Are you okay there?!" A sixteen year old boy was staring at her, breathing heavily and clutching a baseball bat. Well atleast he seemed to be staring a her, his face was partially covered by his jacket's hood.

Trin can only stare back at her savior as he sighed and stepped over the man's body. "Hey you can't stay out here all night, pretty soon every drunk guy will be trying to hook you" His voice sounds kind, and this made Trin finally get back to her senses.She stood up and quickly ran to the boy's side, avoiding the man's crumpled figure. "Errmm thanks...for saving me"

Trin saw him give a quick smile before it turned to an arrogant smirk. "Yea yea just go home" He started walking away, and Trin watched his back, not knowing what to do. She decided to go the other direction, but started feeling nauseous. Darkness engulfed her.
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Kumobit Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Student Digital Artist
added :heart:
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143Gaara-kun Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009
woooo~
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Lex-Yomira234 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2009
In a flash, Raiga was thrown off to the cement concrete by an incredible force and blood flowed from his mouth as he collided with the wall. He slid slightly however, his legs were still able to support him.

He gained his stance and wiped the blood with the back of his glove. He glared at his current opponent and he spit the excess blood from his mouth as a sign of crudeness and disrespect.

Kaelan clapped his hands in mockery "Bravo, Bloodrave, BRA-VO!" irony was at the tip of his tongue. This play was only adding salt to his opponent's wounds.

This pissed Raiga off, "Tch! Ya think this is enough to bring down a Bloodrave?! YOU THINK THAT I'LL DIE WITHOUT AVENGING YUKA?! YOU'RE DEAD WRONG!" his loud cry, his anger, his sorrow, his mixed emotions.

Everything burned from his eyes and they turned into fire. And there, Raiga Bloodrave stood, as the Wrathful Warrior of the Bloodrave.

Kaelan grinned with a playful glint in his eyes. He chuckled in a gleefully dark manner as he witnessed the true form of the 'Wrathful Twin'.

"The 'Bloodrave' clan...they truly are astonishing, when they show their most ugliest form of all. Looks like playtime will be fun after all..."

He smirked darkly and waited for his opponent's next attack.
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Lex-Yomira234 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2009
"GET AWAY FROM HER!" Raiga yelled at him as he ran and clenched his fists. He lifted one of his fist and used the friction in his movement to surround his fist with fire. The time he got close, he launched his attack on Kaelan, thrusting his fist of fire on him. Unfortunately, Kaelan parried from his attack by stepping backwards, making him separate from Trin.

At the moment, Raiga stood still on the wet pavement, glaring at him with now-red eyes. His fists was engulfed by flames "Tch! I missed..."

He looked back at Trin who seems to be surprised by his sudden attack "Run...'that person' must be waiting for you." he said, reverting his attention to the other vampire.

"...I'll hold him off..."
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Kumobit Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2009  Student Digital Artist
awwooo way the go ^^
yey
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Lex-Yomira234 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009
yeah XD
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